Andrea Duran
Mar 17, 2022

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I liked the way your story started off! But, I thought the ending could lead into something more... curious? Ominous? Something to give us a hint into the next chapter :)

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Andrea Duran

Writer | Self-Development | Mental Health | Addiction | Fiction | B.A. Eng/Pysch | Addiction Counselor | Certified Hot Mess | https://linktr.ee/dreabookjunkie